Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts

Saturday, October 6, 2012

A Little Vacation



For a number of months I had been planning to go to North Conway, NH with my father to visit my grandfather and attend Fryeburg Fair in Maine.  Since I hadn’t been checking my calendar for some weeks before the planned trip, I didn’t really know what was going on… turns out the trip was longer than I thought, and I forgot to post something before leaving.  Visiting my grandfather is a real vacation because he does not have Internet, very basic cable, and it’s all very quiet and beautiful up there (even though I did have to work hard moving and piling wood so that he’d be warm during the winter, and walked a lot during the fair); hence why you all have been deprived of a post in a little over a week. 

Nothing special to tell you here except that vacations like the one I just had are important.  Though I did a little work while I was up there—finishing the editing of my book!—I really regained the working spirit which I had lost a bit.  A little quiet and time away from your craft, and I mean not even being around the tools and places with and where you work, can really rejuvenate you. 

Now all I have to do is take the hard-copy edits that I made and make them real on the computer thingy.  Then I’ll send it off to the people who have volunteered to be my first readers (thank you very much!), wait a few weeks, and then make my final edits!  After that I’ll be done.  In the meantime, well, I suppose I’ll finish expanding my master’s thesis real quick and then work on my story that I began talking to y’all about in one of the more recent posts.  Yay, me!

Saturday, September 22, 2012

Editing

While writing this blog I have often tried generalizing on behalf of all artists, not just writers.  The problem with the topic of editing, however, is that I have no idea how an artist of a different tradition than writing go about editing, if at all.  I trust that my painter friend, Alexandra, will enlighten me sometime after reading this post and finding out that I for once don't know something.  I imagine that even painters and sculptors do some form of editing especially as they prepare for a show, which, by the way, Alexandra is now preparing for; I figured I had to mention that so that folks who have been reading this blog questioning, "Who is this Alexandra person?" can check out her work.

For writers, editing is perhaps the most crucial stage of the writing process.  Some writers are able to either work everything out in their head or in an outline prior to writing or can write and write well the first attempt.  Very few writers fall into that category.  And even those that do need good editing.  Each and every piece of writing will need at least a touch-up if the writer wants it to be as good as possible.  Enacting that touch-up, or perhaps a remodeling, or perhaps even a whole make-over, requires plenty of care and patience and skill.  You don't want to ruin the integrity of the work by re-phrasing a sentence or adding a comma that doesn't rhyme with the rest of the work.  That would be tragic.

I am not one of those writers anyway.  Whenever I write an outline, which I often do, I rarely stick to it anyway once I begin writing--I realize that the outline wasn't put in the best order, didn't take everything into account, and simply wasn't suited to writing.  Throwing away disordered outlines doesn't ever mean that my product orders itself through the act of writing.  It's a fact of life that just about everything I do will require editing after my first attempt.  Sometimes that editing will only take half an hour, sometimes it takes a week.  I've gotten used to it.  Thankfully, I enjoy the editing process--not as much as writing, but to a great extent editing is writing--and frankly it's probably what I'm best at.  No doubt I'd make an excellent professional editor.  (If you're looking for one, please pay me)

Since I am in the editing process for the next week or so, at least that's my estimation, I figured I should write about it.  Now I've written all I care to on the subject.  I will add, though, that editing is a skill we should all learn.  I mean, to some extent writing and editing make appearances in a great many jobs and occupations so editing will be useful there.  But editing is more than that.  When we edit we learn that there is room for improvement in our work; when we learn that there is room for improvement in our work we learn that we are not perfect; when we learn we are not perfect we strive for perfection; when we strive for perfection we hopefully fulfill our potential and, in Oscar Wilde's terms, fulfill our personality.  At the very least a world where people have fulfilled their personalities--become fully who they should and want to be--would be a much more exciting place and not full of dull characters.  I, for one, would hate to be dull or "ordinary" in any way.

Thursday, September 20, 2012

Muahaha

Well, folks, I don't have much to say today, mostly because I'm just basking in celebration. 

A week or so ago I shared with y'all that I had finished the first draft of my book, 27 Million Revolutions, detailing the story and reflections of my bike trip fighting slavery.  At the time I estimated that the finished product would contain about 60,000 words--the other day Danielle asked me to calculate how many pages that would be, so I picked up a book that seemed to have average-sized paper and average font/line spacing, literally counted all the words on a page in that book, then did some math: turns out 60,000 words equals approximately 180 pages, a lot more than I thought.  Anyway, I have now basically completed adding all that I want to include from my blog that I kept during the trip and have been less-than-regularly updating since the trip and from the Polaris Project website and other materials that I used during the trip.  The total is now a little more than 80,000 words. 

Now the editing begins.  I'll be printing out the manuscript and doing the editing the old-fashioned way, which is the only way I know how.  The word count will go up a bit at first, and then fall a bit more after.  80,000 might be the final count.  Then I'll have a real book that won't just be some small little crap thing. 

Originally I had thought that I'd be done by the end of October.  But even a thorough editing will only take approximately four or five days; then a perhaps a little more time to let my friends and first-readers to offer feedback and such and edit a bit more if that feedback is not entirely to my liking. 

Want to be a first-reader?  Just let me know by e-mailing me or something and I'll e-mail you a copy after the editing is finished.  Go me!  And go fighting slavery!

Monday, September 10, 2012

Finished!

I'm finished with life, damnit!

No, no.  But just a few minutes ago I finished the first draft of my book on my bike trip last summer.  You can all bow down metaphorically to me now.  I'll give you a slight pause to do so....................  Ok, now that you have properly praised and honored me I'll continue.

The first draft is just over 50,000 words.  Think back to your college application days when you may have had to write a 250-500 page essay and you'll get a sense for how many pages 50,000 words is.  It's not a ton by any means but a good amount.  It's especially a good amount considering how rough the draft is: notes are everywhere reminding me to add information here and a stories there; I left almost all of the first chapter for later.  Anything that did not immediately come to my mind or, for a piece of information, not immediately available in my face, I left for later.  Also, I plan on returning to my blog and journal from the days I was on my trip to see if I simply forgot certain ideas or stories.  My estimation is that when I'm done I'll have written at least 60,000 words, which will form a nice little book.

Even if I still have lots of work to do, adding and then editing everything, it is good to have gotten through to the end.  Until I finish a work to the end I always work sluggishly because I'm constantly thinking of new ideas but have no idea where to put them because I haven't finished yet, and the question, "When will I ever finish this friggin thing!?" weighs more and more on my mind until, indeed, I get through the first draft.  So you might not think a barely finished, not at all polished work of writing is worth celebrating, but for me it is.  The process of adding may take a little while, but I love the process of editing and that never takes me long.  By the end of October, then, I should be all done.

Because my hard work reached a milestone today you can darn well expect me to take a little break from writing.  So you might not see another post here from me until the weekend.  Adios, amigos.